Monday, June 15, 2020

Describe writing

In the early nights of the snow a lady hops down the isle of the snow falling trees. Steam trains swish past as the wind breazes threw the air.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Quin its me Mahuta. I enjoyed reading your short descriptive piece of writing. You used a lot of great words, it blow my mind how many you used. However you could of changed your words because they are all capital letters when there not supposed to be. Also you should add more writing I would like to read a bit more. Other than that great blog.
    Blog you later:)

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  2. Hi Quin its Neafy. I enjoyed reading your short descriptive piece of writing. You used a lot of great words it blow my mind how many you used. If you like you can check my blog out https://kpsquineilt.blogspot.com/

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